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The Garden of Earthly Delights
My Mind Is My Best Friend And My Worst Enemy
Magic (OnKey) 
10th-Dec-2010 08:35 pm
Title: Magic
Pairing: OnKey
Rating: G
Genre(s): crack, humor, fluff, romance
Summary: Kibum drags Jinki on a Christmas shopping trip that leaves the older boy wondering what happened to the magic of Christmas.
a/n: This is only one of two Christmas fics I’m writing. And neither includes porn. Look at me being festive!
For sakitomeh9001  ♥

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    “Ooh! Look at that!” Jinki exclaimed, halting suddenly and practically pressing his face against the glass window in front of a shop. Kibum sighed, retracing his steps so he was next to the older boy, standing impatiently with his hip cocked and his arms crossed.
    “What now?” They’d already been at the mall for an hour and neither of them had managed to pick out a gift for the other members. All thanks to Jinki’s short attention span. And Kibum’s as well, but he wasn’t about to take fault. Not when Jinki had stopped their progress once again to look at…a castle made out of Legos. In a toy store.
    “Isn’t that awesome!?”
    “Mmm,” Kibum hummed non-committedly.
    “Do you think Taemin would like that?”
    “Legos?” Kibum asked in disbelief. He could just imagine the maknae flying across the room to attack the leader when he realized that he’d gotten him toys. Taemin was convinced that he was ‘manly’ now. Better not to anger him, Kibum thought.
    “Oh! And we could get Minho that bike helmet!”
    “…Minho doesn’t have a bike.”
    “And that stuffed dinosaur looks like Jonghyun!” he finished, gesturing toward an obnoxiously gigantic stuffed raptor. Kibum opened his mouth to tell Jinki that they were not going to buy presents for the members in a toy store. But then he saw the stuffed toy.
    “Oh my god,” he let out a loud laugh, clutching his sides, “That really does look like Jonghyun. We have to get it for him,” he announced, grabbing Jinki’s hand and dragging him into the store.
    Five minutes later, they were strolling out of the store with Jinki struggling to carry the giant toy.
    “Why is it okay for us to get Jonghyun this and not okay for us to get Taemin the Lego set?” he questioned, repositioning the dinosaur against his hip.
    “Because Taemin would kill you if you got him anything childish. And it’s funnier to piss Jonghyun off.”
    Jinki pondered what Kibum had said for a moment before deciding that the inner workings of Kim Kibum’s mind was not something he wanted to understand.
    “So what do we get Taemin?”
    “He told me he wants aftershave. Even though he barely has to shave,” Kibum rolled his eyes, leading them into a fancy department store where they got more than a few weird looks considering they were dragging a huge dinosaur with them.
    “What are you getting here?” Jinki questioned, placing the stuffed toy on the ground while Kibum stared at a glass case of fancy looking bottles.
    “Aftershave,” he said, looking at Jinki like he was stupid.
    “But…Taemin barely needs to shave…”
    “But if we don’t get him this, he’ll throw a hissy fit. So let’s just get it,” Kibum explained, pointing to a bottle and waiting as the sales girl rang it up for him.
    Jinki decided that he was glad that he’d come to the mall with Kibum. Otherwise he really wouldn’t have had any idea what to buy the members. Actually, he’d originally wanted to bake cookies, despite the fact that he didn’t bake, but Kibum had told him he was a cheapskate and dragged him out shopping.
    “What are we doing here?” Jinki questioned as they entered another store, swinging the dinosaur around by the tail.
    “Buying Minho headphones,” Kibum said, already picking up a box containing the newest Bose headphones.
    “What’s wrong with his old headphones?”
    “Taemin stepped on them,” Kibum simply stated.
    “I thought the woman who cleans our dorm did that…”
    “Nah, Taemin just didn’t want to be on the receiving end of Minho’s rage.”
    “So why doesn’t Taemin get Minho new headphones?” Jinki asked, wondering how Kibum kept track of everything like this.
    “Because Taemin thinks that he’s still cute enough that he can get away with buying us all crap presents.”
    “But I thought you said that he thinks he’s manly…?”
    “Don’t get me started,” Kibum snapped. So Jinki didn’t.
    They’d returned to the dorm after Kibum had made a very pointed comment about a hat that he saw in a store window while he conveniently chose that moment to slip away to the bathroom. So of course, Jinki bought the hat and didn’t even bother to hide the bag when Kibum returned because it’s not like it was going to be a surprise anyway. Though he did enjoy the pleased look that crossed the other boy’s face when he saw the bag upon his return.
    By the time Jinki was lying in bed that night, he’d decided that Christmas had completely lost its magic.
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    When Christmas morning rolled around, Jinki sat in his pajamas and watched as the members opened their presents, noting just how right Kibum had been about everything. Minho was thankful for the headphones, completely unaware of Taemin’s relieved smile.
Taemin was ecstatic about the aftershave and made a big show of leaving in the middle of present-opening to shave. Needless to say, it didn’t take too long.
Jonghyun was adequately pissed off about the dinosaur, immediately chucking it at a manically-laughing Kibum’s head as soon as he’d opened it. But he was grinning and, shortly thereafter, had named the dinosaur some dumb American name that Kibum had suggested.
Kibum grinned widely when he unwrapped the hat that Jinki bought for him, thanking him as he modeled it for the room.
Taemin got them all coupons for favors that he would do for them. And he really was still too cute to yell at so they all thanked him graciously as he beamed.
Jinki was reasonably happy as he stood up to go put on another pot of coffee, albeit slightly nostalgic for the magical Christmas mornings from his childhood. And he was so busy reminiscing that he hadn’t even noticed that he hadn’t received a present from Kibum. That is, until the aforementioned boy stopped him in the hall with a hand on his elbow and his other hand tucked behind his back.
“Er…do you want your present?” he asked, looking uncharacteristically nervous. He wasn’t even making eye contact.
“Oh!” Jinki responded dumbly, “I…didn’t…yeah.”
Kibum sighed in mock-annoyance and pulled a plate covered in wrapping paper out from behind his back, presenting it to the older boy. Jinki carefully took the platter from the younger boy before he lifted the paper off the top.
Upon seeing the stack of home baked holiday cookies, he felt his chest fill with warmth and he felt that glowing feeling in his stomach that he used to get when he would descend the stairs to see a pile of presents under the Christmas tree as a kid.
“You can’t bake, Jinki, so I figured it would be less dangerous if I did…”
But his sentence was interrupted when Jinki’s lips pressed into his, warm and soft.
When the older boy pulled back, he saw Kibum’s eyes were wide with shock and he felt a laugh bubble up in his chest at seeing him so surprised.
“Merry Christmas!” Jinki chirped, a wide grin stretching across his face.
“Shut up,” Kibum scowled, “You sound like you’re in one of those cheesy holiday cartoons.”
“Well, I feel like I’m in one,” Jinki smiled.
Kibum rolled his eyes, but didn’t protest when Jinki leaned in to kiss him again.
Perhaps all of the magic of Christmas wasn’t gone after all.

key w
Comments 
11th-Dec-2010 02:36 am (UTC)
spot for sakitomeh9001 ♥ :)
11th-Dec-2010 06:47 am (UTC)
Awwwwwwwuhhh!!!! Thank you! The dinosaur Jonghyun and the cookies didn't go over my head, by the way xD You totally capture Key shopping. And Onew would totally be amazed by a lego castle, as would I. I think a Lego Chicken must be built over break... clearly I do wonderful things with my spare time.
I'm finally getting in the Christmas spirit now! Arigatouuu! <3
Jinkshis bless us, every one!
11th-Dec-2010 02:37 am (UTC)
spot for ellie_eunnie
11th-Dec-2010 09:13 am (UTC)
you wrote onkey...

But his sentence was interrupted when Jinki’s lips pressed into his, warm and soft.
When the older boy pulled back, he saw Kibum’s eyes were wide with shock and he felt a laugh bubble up in his chest at seeing him so surprised.
“Merry Christmas!” Jinki chirped, a wide grin stretching across his face.
“Shut up,” Kibum scowled, “You sound like you’re in one of those cheesy holiday cartoons.”
“Well, I feel like I’m in one,” Jinki smiled.
Kibum rolled his eyes, but didn’t protest when Jinki leaned in to kiss him again.
Perhaps all of the magic of Christmas wasn’t gone after all.

perfect

i love onkey
and ilu =)♥

11th-Dec-2010 02:38 am (UTC)
spot for l2inl2in :)
22nd-Dec-2010 04:02 am (UTC)
I HAVE A SPOT! I HAVE A SPOT!

Idk why this always makes me hella excited but it does.
This was so cute and this comment is hella lame because I'm talking to you like RIGHT NOW!
Whatevz.

I think the best part of this was all the dialog about Taemin. I just....him being a tween kind of kills me.

Fail comment for an awesome fic. Mian *pouty face*
11th-Dec-2010 03:06 am (UTC)
OTP SPOT~
11th-Dec-2010 03:10 am (UTC)
i hope you enjoy!
11th-Dec-2010 03:10 am (UTC)
i love this!!
khekekkeke >.<
11th-Dec-2010 03:11 am (UTC)
i'm glad that you enjoyed this!
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Dec-2010 03:37 am (UTC)
Haha, this is so cute, and I think if I had an oppurtunity to buy Jjong a present, I would buy him a giant dino with a big doe eyes just like him. I lol-ed at how right Kibum was about each present for every member, luckily Jinki had Kibum tagged with him all along, or he would eventually pissed off all the members. Hey, but I think I would buy the Lego castle since I really want to know how a cute Taemin would pull out a hissy fit. Keke, I'm too sadist.

Aigoo, at least Kibum made Jinki suprised with his present, the last scene is really sweet. And I think by now, Jinki would have known how almighty Kibum was. He seemed to consider everyone's wishes. I'd better buy Christmas presents soon. Ahh, your fic make me want Christmas to come soon. Thanks for this wonderful fic! Keke, and merry early Christmas to you!
11th-Dec-2010 07:00 am (UTC)
early merry christmas to you too!
i'm glad that this got you in the christmas spirit! haha.
and of course no one should ever doubt the almighty key!
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Dec-2010 03:54 am (UTC)
omo this is so adorable beyond words! XD
AHAHAHAHAHAHA AT JONGHYUN'S PRESENT <3
And Taemin seriously doesnt look like he needs to shave... Or maybe thats bcos I dont know him in real life / dont see him CLOSE enough. D:
LOL KEY IS BEING A DIVA AND ONEW IS A SANGTAE BUT THEY FIT EACH OTHER SO WELL! <3
Hehehe Minho seems like a scary one when he gets angry neh. XD
Thank you for sharing this!
Merry (very) advanced XMAS!
11th-Dec-2010 06:58 am (UTC)
merry advanced christmas to you too! haha.
i'm glad that you liked it!
and yeah, i can't really imagine taemin w/ facial hair. nor do i want to. lol.
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Dec-2010 04:19 am (UTC)
Oh, this is simply adorable~ And definitely a good read for the Christmas season! (Though I don't celebrate it, I do enjoy the fics lol.) I really do love OnKey's interactions in here, it's so them. Key's comments about the other members really cracked me up, especially Taemin lol. That boy... Tsk tsk. I wonder will he ever be manly. XD
11th-Dec-2010 06:57 am (UTC)
thank you!
i'm glad that you liked it! and Key's comments :)
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Dec-2010 04:40 am (UTC)
This gives me warm feeling through Christmas. This is magic ♥♥♥
11th-Dec-2010 06:56 am (UTC)
aw! i'm glad!
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Dec-2010 07:11 am (UTC)
this was so cute X3
can't stop grinning
11th-Dec-2010 07:23 am (UTC)
thanks!
i'm glad that you liked it!
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Dec-2010 07:24 am (UTC)
AWWWWW ALL THE MEMBERS ARE SO CUTE HERE WELL NOT FOR MINHO I THINK?
LOL KIDDING
11th-Dec-2010 07:38 am (UTC)
haha. i'm glad that you liked it!
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Dec-2010 09:00 am (UTC)
It's so early here and I think I've just woken my brother with my "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW", which was maybe a bit too loud and a bit too high-pitched.

But I couldn't not do it! This was just so adorable!
Hahaha, yet I was so surprised at first as I read the genres and didn't see smut for a change :D

But that's okay since it's about Christmas. I once wrote a Christmas fanfic as well, and for some reason I couldn't include porn either. And honestly, this one doesn't even need porn to be perfect.

I had to laugh so hard at Taeminnie pretending to be all grown up and manly now XD
I really think this is something he has either already done or will do soon.
But he should admit what he did to Minho's headphones...as if he could really be mad at his Taemin. And even if he was, maybe that would lead to sex after having a fight. And you know, I love it when they have sex after a fight...well, whatever, just needed to say that :D

The whole part with Key and Onew in the mall was already great and I don't know what to quote, because I feel like each sentence perfectly matches the way Key and Onew would actually react!! I really admire you for being able to do that!

But the end...! When Onew saw the cookies and smiled I had to smile too because the images in my head were so utterly cute and waaah (that was when I went all "AWWWWWW", but I guess you figured that already)!

Just so you know - I can't wait for the second Christmas fanfiction! ♥

11th-Dec-2010 06:30 pm (UTC)
yay! i'm so glad that you liked this!
and yeah, no porn. it's surprising coming from me XD
funny that you mention 2min sex b/c i totally have been wanting to write them. we'll see. haha.
but i'm so happy that you liked the dialogue! that's always my favorite part to wrote.
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Dec-2010 01:23 pm (UTC)
so adorable and precious ♥
really thanks for sharing this! :D
11th-Dec-2010 06:26 pm (UTC)
thanks!
i'm glad that you liked it!
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Dec-2010 01:48 pm (UTC)
awwww...
i laughed at the dinosaur XD
11th-Dec-2010 06:26 pm (UTC)
haha. i'm glad that you enjoyed it! and the dinosaur XD
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Dec-2010 04:32 pm (UTC)
OnKey ♥ they are so cute (:

I love Key being all shy~ ^^ haha
11th-Dec-2010 06:25 pm (UTC)
haha. i'm glad that you liked it!
thanks for reading and commenting!
12th-Dec-2010 07:37 am (UTC)
awwiieeee....shy Kibummie..kkkk
wuvv OmKey...<3
12th-Dec-2010 07:41 am (UTC)
i'm glad you liked it!
and shy Kibum is pretty adorable.
thanks for reading and commenting!
12th-Dec-2010 08:02 am (UTC)
Nice Christmas fic~! Oh my Taemin can get away with anything~
LOL they bought Jjong a Dinosour toy xDD
12th-Dec-2010 08:35 am (UTC)
thanks!
i'm glad that you liked it!
and yes, he definitely can. haha.
thanks for reading and commenting!
13th-Dec-2010 01:29 pm (UTC)
And Kibum’s as well, but he wasn’t about to take fault.
.... hes just to perfect to do so haha

He could just imagine the maknae flying across the room to attack the leader when he realized that he’d gotten him toys.
ahahahaaha

“Oh! And we could get Minho that bike helmet!”
“…Minho doesn’t have a bike.”

Onew...u are so stupid I just need to love u XD

And it’s funnier to piss Jonghyun off.
... I think this is a real life quote from him XD

“He told me he wants aftershave. Even though he barely has to shave,”
LOL OMG I LAUGHED SO HARD XD AFTERSHAVE?? SERIOUSLY?? HAHA

Because Taemin thinks that he’s still cute enough that he can get away with buying us all crap presents.”
“But I thought you said that he thinks he’s manly…?”

BECAUSE ITS TAEMIN....HE DOESNT MAKE SENSE AT ALL
omg did u watch this?
XDD 'B/C the noonas like it' XD Just reminds me of that

But he was grinning and, shortly thereafter, had named the dinosaur some dumb American name that Kibum had suggested.
LOL
....
Harry...is this u? xD

Taemin got them all coupons for favors that he would do for them. And he really was still too cute to yell at so they all thanked him graciously as he beamed.
LOL STILL I DID THIS 2 YEARS AGO! I WAS 17 BTW XDD like free hugs,doing laundry..but my mom never used them XD''
I totally forgot about them

“Er…do you want your present?” he asked, looking uncharacteristically nervous. He wasn’t even making eye contact.
awww cute <33

When the older boy pulled back, he saw Kibum’s eyes were wide with shock and he felt a laugh bubble up in his chest at seeing him so surprised.
do I assume right when I say they arent in a relationship??
awww this was so cute ;____;
I know how Onew feels though ;___;''
I'm excited for the next xmas story <3
13th-Dec-2010 02:56 pm (UTC)
ah! thank you for the long comment! i love quoting tbh XD
lmao. Harry XD that's perfect. now i'm imagining Key and Jonghyun pronouncing the word 'Harry.' haha.
and i got my mom a coupon for me to make brownies like four years back when i was 16-ish. i never did it XD
and yep, you're right. they were not previously on a relationship. i realized that i never actually made that clear so i'm glad that you got it :)
i'm so glad that you enjoyed this!
thanks for reading and commenting!
19th-Dec-2010 11:21 am (UTC)
This is simply flufftastic. I really enjoyed your characterizations. I sure would love to see what happened after the impromptu (?) thank you kiss!
19th-Dec-2010 04:21 pm (UTC)
thank you!
i'm glad that you liked it, especially the characterizations!
thanks for reading and commenting!
13th-Jan-2011 12:31 pm (UTC)
I'm so late for this but I love the
“You can’t bake, Jinki, so I figured it would be less dangerous if I did…” --- AWWWW KIBUM THAT'S SO SWEET <3

love the story, thanks! :)
13th-Jan-2011 04:43 pm (UTC)
thank you!
i'm so glad you liked it!
thanks for reading and commenting!
12th-Feb-2011 03:49 am (UTC) - 34
LMAOOOO at Jjong getting the dinosaur of course Kibum would do that to piss him off. Oh and Taemin is such a child in this like he will throw a fist if he doesn't get what he wants (the boy barely has any hair pleaseee) and getting away with stepping on Minho's headphones! Hahaha childish Taemin makes everyone happy! I specially loved the last part where Kibum gives him the cookies that's just one of those 'awwww' moments that you can't help but remember and smile about all the time! 
I love you you always make so jolly
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12th-Feb-2011 03:56 am (UTC) - Re: 34
i'm so glad that you liked this!
childish!taemin was a lot of fun to write.
and i'm glad that the cookies was an 'awww moment' :)
thanks for reading and commenting!
1st-Apr-2011 04:48 pm (UTC)
so sweeettt!!!
he's not an umma for nothing ^^
even for dubu leader <3
imagining him carrying the dino XDDDD *i'll glomp u Jinki :D
1st-Apr-2011 06:42 pm (UTC)
haha. he is indeed the umma.
i'm glad that you liked it!
thanks for reading and commenting!
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