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My Mind Is My Best Friend And My Worst Enemy
First Time (girl!OnTae) 
25th-Jul-2011 11:11 pm
Title: First Time
Pairing: girl!OnTae
Rating: PG-13
Genre(s): romance, fluff, humor
Word Count: 408
Summary: Eunsook is too sappy for her own good. She feels inclined to blame Disney movies.


    “I want to give my everything to you,” Taeyeon says earnestly, feet tucked under her as she sits on Eunsook’s dorm bed and looks at her with her big eyes, “I want you to take my virginity.” The younger girl blushes, but her unwavering gaze shows that she means it.

    “Oh! I-” Eunsook fumbles with her words, feeling her heart expanding in her chest so that she’s absolutely sure that it’s going to burst at any moment and make a giant mess.

    The fact that Taeyeon really trusts her enough to do this…it means more to her than she can even fathom. Especially when they both know that, technically, she can’t offer the same. She’s four years older than Taeyeon, after all. And her year long relationship with her ex-boyfriend effectively took away her virginity. Physically anyway. Eunsook still feels like a virgin- sometimes honestly forgetting that she’s not. Because it wasn’t special with him- it wasn’t what she’d been expecting at all. And she feels like she still needs to be completely opened up by someone.

    “Taeyeon, I…I- that means so much to me!” Eunsook stops quickly, feeling herself tearing up. She swallows and tries to force back the tears. She’s heard of crying during sex or crying after sex, but who cries before sex? That’s a whole new level of sappiness- a level that she didn’t think that she’d ever reach. 

    Sure, she’d liked Disney movies as a kid (okay, she still likes them), but it’s not like they come with labels that say Warning: watching too many romantic animated films will cause intense sappiness, including, but not limited to, crying before sex.

    “And I’m so glad that you feel like I can be the one to…er…take your virginity?” Eunsook thinks that maybe if she keeps talking, she’ll head off the tears, “I mean, since I’m a girl and all. And I don’t have a penis. I guess I have fingers though. I have a whole hand of them. Two actually! I-”

    “Eunsook,” Taeyeon interrupts her, a soft smile on her face and a look of pure adoration in her eyes, “Shh.”

    The younger girl’s lips are on hers then- soft and slightly sticky with leftover lips gloss. Eunsook’s head goes light with every press of Taeyeon’s mouth against her own and she feels like she’s perhaps the luckiest girl in the world. But when Taeyeon pulls back slightly and smiles at her, she knows it.

onew 2
26th-Jul-2011 04:12 am (UTC)
26th-Jul-2011 04:14 am (UTC)
good lord you're fast!
i was about to spot you! lol
26th-Jul-2011 04:24 am (UTC)

I have no words for this... /heart explodes

“I mean, since I’m a girl and all. And I don’t have a penis. I guess I have fingers though. I have a whole hand of them. Two actually! I-”
26th-Jul-2011 04:28 am (UTC)
i'm so glad that you liked it! /clings
and that was my favorite line XD
i'm glad that you were amused too! haha.
thanks for always reading and commenting my darling ♥
26th-Jul-2011 04:14 am (UTC)
spot for l2inl2in <3
31st-Jul-2011 06:26 am (UTC)
Why would you even spot me for ontae XD
Honestly I can only stand ontae when its les and you write it <33333333333

this was cotton candy sweet but way too short lol.
good job babe ^^b
31st-Jul-2011 06:35 am (UTC)
b/c i spot you for everything you dork XD
but i'm glad that you at least like my les ontae. and that you liked this, even though it's too short haha
thanks for reading and commenting!
26th-Jul-2011 04:15 am (UTC)
spot for onewlurver :)
26th-Jul-2011 05:27 am (UTC)
Perfect, perfect, perfect.
You captured so nicely the realization that sexual experience does not equal intimacy...then went straight for the sangtae. Wonderful.
26th-Jul-2011 05:36 am (UTC)
ah thank you!
i'm so glad that it came across well!
and of course there had to be some sangtae. it's onew after all. lol.
thanks for reading and commenting! :)
26th-Jul-2011 06:05 am (UTC)
This was so cute and awkward in that wonderful kind of way ^^
26th-Jul-2011 06:19 am (UTC)
thank you!
i'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
thanks for reading and commenting!
26th-Jul-2011 11:36 am (UTC)
ONTAE!!!!!! Yes I love it!!! Disney movies make you weak and sappy. It's true!

Hugs to you for making them so adorable. I want to squish them both! ONTAE SQUISHES!!!

Oh yeah I have had like no sleep..so yeah..pay no mind to my rambling about the ONTAE!!! Cause I will keep squishing the cute fluffy romantic lovelies till I feel better. and that may take some time! HUGS! SQUISHES!!!! FLUFFY!!! OH GAWD, FLUFFY ONTAE SQUISHES!!!!!
26th-Jul-2011 04:39 pm (UTC)
haha i'm glad that you liked it!
fluffy ontae squishes sounds amazing lol.
thanks for reading and commenting!
26th-Jul-2011 10:56 pm (UTC)
haha~ oh EunSookie XD
this was sweet
26th-Jul-2011 11:39 pm (UTC)
thank you :)
i'm glad that you liked it!
thanks for reading and commenting!
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