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My Mind Is My Best Friend And My Worst Enemy
Little Earthquakes (HyoHyun) 
11th-Sep-2011 02:28 am
Title: Little Earthquakes
Pairing: Hyoyeon/Seohyun
Rating: G
Genre(s): romance, fluff
Word Count: 467
Summary: Sometimes Hyoyeon knows just what's right for Seohyun.
Written for unniefic's 24 Hour Challenge with the prompt: Some people feel the rain, others just get wet. - Bob Dylan


    Seohyun knows that she’s the most introverted member of Girls’ Generation, but it doesn’t bother her nearly as much as it used to. Especially because she has become much more outgoing since she originally met the other girls. It’s just who she is and she can’t say that she’s discontent with herself. A bit sub-conscious sometimes, slightly uncomfortable in her own skin others. But for the most part, she’s content with whom she has become.

    Hyoyeon, on the other hand, is quite outgoing. Not as outgoing as Sunny or Sooyoung perhaps, but she is certainly more extroverted than Seohyun is. The way that she can seem so carefree and happy is something that Seohyun envies because she herself is constantly thinking and worrying and calculating the consequences of her actions.

    She thinks that her own cautious nature is what makes her Hyoyeon’s first choice to drag along with her whether it’s a trip to the bathroom during rehearsal or a trek across Seoul to go to a café that the older girl swears has the most amazing coffee in all of the city.

    And Seohyun credits her increasing adventurous spirit to Hyoyeon’s attention to her and her enthusiastic urgings for her to try new things. The other girl’s positivity and thirst for new experiences makes Seohyun a little less afraid to fail because the experience just might be worth it anyway.

    “It’s raining!” Seohyun squeaks, ducking under the awning to a small market on the way back to their dorm.

    “So what?” Hyoyeon shrugs, fixing Seohyun with a challenging stare and grabbing her hand to pull her out into the downpour.

    “I don’t want to get wet,” Seohyun protests, stepping back even as Hyoyeon pulls her forward.

    “That might be a side effect,” Hyoyeon agrees cheekily, giving the younger girl’s hand a firm yank and successfully pulling her into the rain.

    “Unnie!” Seohyun shrieks, ducking her head and doing her best to shield her face with her unoccupied hand.

    “Live a little,” Hyoyeon tells her, beginning to walk forward and pulling Seohyun with her.

    “But I’ll have to change my clothes when we get back,” Seohyun tries one more time even as she’s dragged along by the other girl.

    “Stop thinking,” Hyoyeon instructs, stopping once more and turning to face Seohyun, “And start feeling.”

    Then Hyoyeon’s lips are on Seohyun’s and it’s all the younger can do not to squeak in surprise. But once the initial shock fades, she finds herself tentatively responding to the kiss- the rain all but forgotten.

     And as Hyoyeon cups her face, mixing the rainwater on her hands with the droplets on Seohyun’s cheeks, Seohyun knows that Hyoyeon is right. Thinking and planning is nothing without the feeling- something she thinks that the older girl will teach her over and over again.

sica leopard
11th-Sep-2011 07:36 am (UTC)
spot for Nathalia ♥♥♥♥♥
24th-Sep-2011 07:49 am (UTC)
I love this because certainly I have developed a passionate love for Hyoyeon like seriously! (the baby freaking broke my number 1/! key of my laptop so I have to press it a billion times skljfrklesgnbrfes)
so anyways this is cute and sweet &hearts
I actually read this a whileeeeeeeeeee ago sorry for commenting so late my dear.

I love it....

however there is a question that keeps lingering in my mind even though I read this a while ago and is this:

why is the fic called little earthquakes but it's about raining?

24th-Sep-2011 12:31 pm (UTC)
aw thank you!
hyoyeon is ♥ indeed
sorry about your 1/! key though /hugs
it's from the title of a Tori Amos song except it really has nothing to do with the song XD
thanks for commenting lovely ♥
11th-Sep-2011 07:36 am (UTC)
spot for l2inl2in <3
11th-Sep-2011 07:37 am (UTC)
spot for onewlurver :)
11th-Sep-2011 07:49 am (UTC)
HyoSeooooo. They're my favorite SNSD ship <3 This is so cute, and you totally got down their personalities right. I love it. Thanks for writing :)
11th-Sep-2011 04:03 pm (UTC)
aw thank you!
i'm so glad that you liked it and that you think i got their personalities right :)
hyoseo is actually a new ship for me- they are just so adorable in the phuket dvds!
thanks for reading and commenting!
11th-Sep-2011 11:08 pm (UTC)
I love this :D This is exactly the way I see them, perfect characterization.
11th-Sep-2011 11:51 pm (UTC)
thank you!
i'm so glad that you enjoyed it and that you found their characterizations to be realistic :)
thanks for reading and commenting!
12th-Sep-2011 03:50 am (UTC)
Aww this is so sweet. It's like that sometimes isn't, being shy or scared and all you need is the right person you can trust to bring you out of it. :)
12th-Sep-2011 05:50 am (UTC)
aw thank you so much!
i'm so glad that you liked it!
thanks for reading and commenting!
2nd-Jan-2012 03:05 am (UTC)
She's one of my favorites (Sooyoung, Hyoyeon, Yoona) so this makes me happy.
Again, not much of a Seohyun fan, but this was really cute and really quite perfect.

'Stop thinking,' Hyoyeon instructs, stopping once more and turning to face Seohyun, 'And start feeling.'
THAT was perfect. I friggin loved it. Please write more Hyo!
2nd-Jan-2012 05:23 am (UTC)
i definitely want to write more hyo! i think this is my favorite pairing with her (b/c of all the hyoseo on the phuket dvd. they were just goofing off together and being adorable lol) but i want to try hyoyoon (is that the pairing name? idek lol), hyosica, and hyofany as well :)
thanks for reading and commenting!
4th-Jan-2012 05:05 am (UTC)
Then write more Hyo! Make me happy and write more of her!!! I'm really fine with any pairing of her, I ship her with everyone. And yes, there was a lot of HyoSeo in that DVD. And I think it's HyoA or HyoYoon... And if you did I would freak because that's like one of my favorite pairings with her...
Thank you for posting!
22nd-Jun-2012 12:18 pm (UTC)
this is sooo beautiful *,* in my eyes.
any change that will be more?
22nd-Jun-2012 05:39 pm (UTC)
thank you!
there's no more of this verse at the moment, but i intend to write more HyoSeo in the future!
thanks for reading and commenting!
22nd-Jun-2012 08:33 pm (UTC)
yay!! I will wait patiently for them.
they are so pretty in my eyes *,*
thx for writing it :D

Edited at 2012-06-22 08:33 pm (UTC)
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